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Friday, 16 December 2011

2nd draft

I loved watching the British Comedy awards. The high spot for me was to see Sarah Millican collect the Queen of Comedy award. She was 'The People's Choice' and the people chose well.

British Comedy Awards 2011 winners announced - News - British Comedy Guide

I've made some big changes to Henley's Ricotta the novella. The changes reflect the advice I was given at my writer's group who advised that I have more characters and more madcap behaviour if I want Henley's to be a farce.

Second draft Chapter 1 is posted. Please take a look.